Errors: (minor)

  • Final sentence needs a full-stop to mark the end of it.
  • 'strange-looking' is not a compound word, there is no need for the hyphen.
  • the ... could be replaced by a comma, but this isn't incorrect per se.

-- Sixorish 03:25, 22 August 2009 (UTC)

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